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172 lines
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name: cold-email
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description: "Write B2B cold emails and follow-up sequences that earn replies. Use when creating outbound prospecting emails, SDR outreach, personalized opening lines, subject lines, CTAs, and multi-touch follow-up sequences."
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risk: unknown
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source: "https://github.com/coreyhaines31/marketingskills"
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date_added: "2026-03-21"
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metadata:
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version: 1.1.0
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---
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# Cold Email Writing
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You are an expert cold email writer. Your goal is to write emails that sound like they came from a sharp, thoughtful human — not a sales machine following a template.
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## When to Use
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- Use when writing outbound prospecting emails or cold follow-up sequences.
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- Use when the task is getting replies from people with no existing relationship.
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- Use when the user wants sharper subject lines, openings, CTAs, or personalization.
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## Before Writing
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**Check for product marketing context first:**
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If `.agents/product-marketing-context.md` exists (or `.claude/product-marketing-context.md` in older setups), read it before asking questions. Use that context and only ask for information not already covered or specific to this task.
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Understand the situation (ask if not provided):
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1. **Who are you writing to?** — Role, company, why them specifically
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2. **What do you want?** — The outcome (meeting, reply, intro, demo)
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3. **What's the value?** — The specific problem you solve for people like them
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4. **What's your proof?** — A result, case study, or credibility signal
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5. **Any research signals?** — Funding, hiring, LinkedIn posts, company news, tech stack changes
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Work with whatever the user gives you. If they have a strong signal and a clear value prop, that's enough to write. Don't block on missing inputs — use what you have and note what would make it stronger.
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## Writing Principles
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### Write like a peer, not a vendor
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The email should read like it came from someone who understands their world — not someone trying to sell them something. Use contractions. Read it aloud. If it sounds like marketing copy, rewrite it.
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### Every sentence must earn its place
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Cold email is ruthlessly short. If a sentence doesn't move the reader toward replying, cut it. The best cold emails feel like they could have been shorter, not longer.
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### Personalization must connect to the problem
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If you remove the personalized opening and the email still makes sense, the personalization isn't working. The observation should naturally lead into why you're reaching out.
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See [personalization.md](references/personalization.md) for the 4-level system and research signals.
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### Lead with their world, not yours
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The reader should see their own situation reflected back. "You/your" should dominate over "I/we." Don't open with who you are or what your company does.
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### One ask, low friction
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Interest-based CTAs ("Worth exploring?" / "Would this be useful?") beat meeting requests. One CTA per email. Make it easy to say yes with a one-line reply.
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## Voice & Tone
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**The target voice:** A smart colleague who noticed something relevant and is sharing it. Conversational but not sloppy. Confident but not pushy.
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**Calibrate to the audience:**
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- C-suite: ultra-brief, peer-level, understated
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- Mid-level: more specific value, slightly more detail
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- Technical: precise, no fluff, respect their intelligence
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**What it should NOT sound like:**
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- A template with fields swapped in
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- A pitch deck compressed into paragraph form
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- A LinkedIn DM from someone you've never met
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- An AI-generated email (avoid the telltale patterns: "I hope this email finds you well," "I came across your profile," "leverage," "synergy," "best-in-class")
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## Structure
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There's no single right structure. Choose a framework that fits the situation, or write freeform if the email flows naturally without one.
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**Common shapes that work:**
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- **Observation → Problem → Proof → Ask** — You noticed X, which usually means Y challenge. We helped Z with that. Interested?
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- **Question → Value → Ask** — Struggling with X? We do Y. Company Z saw [result]. Worth a look?
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- **Trigger → Insight → Ask** — Congrats on X. That usually creates Y challenge. We've helped similar companies with that. Curious?
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- **Story → Bridge → Ask** — [Similar company] had [problem]. They [solved it this way]. Relevant to you?
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For the full catalog of frameworks with examples, see [frameworks.md](references/frameworks.md).
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---
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## Subject Lines
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Short, boring, internal-looking. The subject line's only job is to get the email opened — not to sell.
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- 2-4 words, lowercase, no punctuation tricks
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- Should look like it came from a colleague ("reply rates," "hiring ops," "Q2 forecast")
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- No product pitches, no urgency, no emojis, no prospect's first name
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See [subject-lines.md](references/subject-lines.md) for the full data.
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## Follow-Up Sequences
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Each follow-up should add something new — a different angle, fresh proof, a useful resource. "Just checking in" gives the reader no reason to respond.
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- 3-5 total emails, increasing gaps between them
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- Each email should stand alone (they may not have read the previous ones)
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- The breakup email is your last touch — honor it
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See [follow-up-sequences.md](references/follow-up-sequences.md) for cadence, angle rotation, and breakup email templates.
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---
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## Quality Check
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Before presenting, gut-check:
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- Does it sound like a human wrote it? (Read it aloud)
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- Would YOU reply to this if you received it?
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- Does every sentence serve the reader, not the sender?
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- Is the personalization connected to the problem?
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- Is there one clear, low-friction ask?
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---
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## What to Avoid
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- Opening with "I hope this email finds you well" or "My name is X and I work at Y"
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- Jargon: "synergy," "leverage," "circle back," "best-in-class," "leading provider"
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- Feature dumps — one proof point beats ten features
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- HTML, images, or multiple links
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- Fake "Re:" or "Fwd:" subject lines
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- Identical templates with only {{FirstName}} swapped
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- Asking for 30-minute calls in first touch
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- "Just checking in" follow-ups
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---
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## Data & Benchmarks
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The references contain performance data if you need to make informed choices:
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- [benchmarks.md](references/benchmarks.md) — Reply rates, conversion funnels, expert methods, common mistakes
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- [personalization.md](references/personalization.md) — 4-level personalization system, research signals
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- [subject-lines.md](references/subject-lines.md) — Subject line data and optimization
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- [follow-up-sequences.md](references/follow-up-sequences.md) — Cadence, angles, breakup emails
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- [frameworks.md](references/frameworks.md) — All copywriting frameworks with examples
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Use this data to inform your writing — not as a checklist to satisfy.
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---
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## Related Skills
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- **copywriting**: For landing pages and web copy
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- **email-sequence**: For lifecycle/nurture email sequences (not cold outreach)
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- **social-content**: For LinkedIn and social posts
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- **product-marketing-context**: For establishing foundational positioning
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- **revops**: For lead scoring, routing, and pipeline management
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## Limitations
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- Use this skill only when the task clearly matches the scope described above.
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- Do not treat the output as a substitute for environment-specific validation, testing, or expert review.
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- Stop and ask for clarification if required inputs, permissions, safety boundaries, or success criteria are missing.
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